I'm trying to play around with a couple of ideas regarding my upcoming Self Censorship project. I have done some experimentation on my year of film blog where I physically drew on the film negative resulting in haphazard white lines covering up any nudity. However my ORIGINAL concept was more in line with what you will see below. 

What do you guys think? Does this work for a concept piece? Would it be better with more of a physical prop in the photo instead of adding it in post? Are  the font and description choices sufficiently "FCC Censor" enough?